Friday 15 May 2020

Black Pome

this is my black poem

Three angels, had voices like silent waters.
they all smiled with deep green eyes
to the moon.
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3 comments:

  1. Phil @ Ako Hiko17 May 2020 at 13:00

    Ka pai Molly! What an awesome poem. I'm so impressed that you managed to fit a simile and some adjectives in there. It's making me think about what the original text was about... Do you enjoy writing poetry? Do you know any other types of poem?

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  2. Ulrike Petrus17 May 2020 at 14:51

    HI there Molly
    What a great idea. I like the way you have used adjectives to describe the eyes.

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  3. Anonymous12 June 2020 at 14:36

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